Writing 1 Activity 2
My Idol
P2 D5
My Father
My father’s name is Eko Cahyo Rudiyanto. He was born in Muntilan , in the middle of Java on 21 April 1963. He was born in average economical family. He is the oldest child in his family who has 4 brothers and 2 sisters but they did not live together when they were child. My father lived with his grandparents because he studied near from his grandparent’s home and his brothers and sisters lived with their parents.
My father graduated from Pangudi Luhur elementary school in Muntilan. Then , he continued his school at SMPN 1 Muntilan, but after that he did not continue his study to senior high school. His father ordered him to continue his study in SMK. My father did not like it but he must obey to his father’s rules. After finished his study in SMK Pangudi Luhur, he did not continue his study to the university. My father was very sad, but he didn’t want his parents know about that. So, he just worked in his uncle repair shop and worked as a driver in public transportation to help his parents.
Then, “something” changed my father’s life. Someday, after 4 years worked, my father read a magazine. He looked for a scholarship in that magazine because he still wanted to continue his school. He wanted to be a success man. After he got the announcement about the scholarship, he tried to follow the exam and fortunately, he passed the exam. He got full scholarship from Widya Yuwana University at that moment.
My father got a scholarship at Major of Phsycology in that university. He studied so hard for defend his scholarship. I think, he was a good student because his parents never paid for his school. In that university, he falling in love with someone who is my mother now. My mother was my father’s classmate. They are falling in love each other and made a special relationship but no one of their friends knew about it. After graduated from that university, they got married and it made their friend surprised.
After got married, my father and my mother worked in Padang. They have been working as a teacher until now. After 2 years got married, they got their first child who is me and 2 years later, they got their second baby who is my sister. We have been living together in my little house until now. I hope we can live happily ever after and I can make my father proud of me
Wednesday, May 25, 2011
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3 comments:
that is good essay alfa!!
and keep writing!!
Your descriptive essay is good ..
I am interested with your essay ...
My suggest just check your grammar and punctuation ...
That is all from me , thanks ...
What a story,Alfa...
But,what about the conclusion...?
I saw your conclusion it just a sentence and not describe al of your esay at all..
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