Saturday, May 21, 2011

example of contrast and comparison essay

Writing 1 Activity 5
Contrast and Comparison Essay
P5D2
Between Ride a Bicycle and Ride a Motorcycle
In our daily life, we always see many vechicles in the street. There are motorcycles, cars, bicycles and anything else. People use the vechicles for help them do their activites, for example, if they want to go to their office, they use vechicles for moving from their home to their office and something else that they do by using . But people in this world have many choises of vechicles that they want to ride, especially motorcycle and bicycle. They have the reason why the want to use a bicycle or a motorcycle.
Some people chose to ride a motorcycle in their daily life, especially for the employees who want to arrive at the office punctually. If you ride a motorcycle, it is not spend much time because traffic jam, the motorcycle can drag the another vechicles that bigger than motorcycle like buses or cars. In some cases, some people regard that their motorcycle as their style. They make over their motorcycle for make it better.
Motorcycle are benefit for some people but in some cases, motorcycle are unbenefit too. Ride a motorcycle are not good for health. Beside of motorcycle produce much pollution that make our earth are broke, ride a motorcycle is not good for our body because we just sit at the motorcycle without do some movement. One thing that we must remember is when we ride a motorcycle, e draw on the pollution. It is very dangerous for our health and our body.
Beside of some people that ride a motorcycle, a lot of people who think about their health chose to ride a bicycle. How can I say that ? Because when we ride a bicycle, it same with we do exercise. By ride a bicycle, we paddle the pedals so we produce much sweat and it is very good for our health. Although when we ride bicycle, we draw on the pollution too but the rider of bicycle don’t produce the pollution and it is the way that can stop the global warming which happen in our earth now.
Ride a bicycle are very good but sometimes people feel so tired because ride a bicycle need more energy than ride a motorcycle. Some rider of bicycles must get up early for avoid the traffic jam and arrive in the office at the punctual time.
Ride a motorcycle or ride a bicycle have benefit and unbenefit. It depends to us and our activities. If you just have a little time, please ride your motorcycle because motorcycle is faster than bicycle but if you have much time and you want to be healthier, please ride your bicycle because it is very good for your health.

3 comments:

Adnan Chucklaz said...

it is a good essay
I am interseting...
but be careful of your grammar...
"People use the vechicles for help them do their activites,"
after for, we use gerund...
so the correct is helping...

thanks...
please comment my blog too...
:)

Unknown said...

I agree with adnan's comment, be careful for using grammar alfa!!
keep writing dude!!

Vincensia Alfa said...

thanks my pals, i will make it correct :)

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