Wednesday, May 25, 2011

my self

Writing 1 Activity 2
My Self
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Me and My Self
Every people in the world have different personality, including me. They have characteristics in their personality that make them different with the other people. Now, I want to tell you about me and my personality that make me different with the other people.
My name is Vincensia Alfa Bhinekha Putri. My mother said my name has meaning. Vincensia is my God Father’s name because I was born in Catholic’s family. Alfa means the first so because I am the first child in my family so my parents gave that name to me. Bhineka in Indonesia means “ berbeda-beda tapi tetap satu jua “. My father is from Muntilan, in the middle of Java and my mother comes from Sumba, Nusa Tenggara Timur, it’s so far, but they can live together now and don’t look to their differences. I think that’s the reason they gave that name to me. The last is Putri. In Indonesia, Putri means a girl. So, because I am a girl, my parents gave that name to me.
Beside of my name, now, I want to tell you about my appearance. I am a girl with tan skin. I am pretty tall about 163 cm and I think I am a slender girl. I have black eyes, pointed nose and black straight hair. Sometimes, I think I am very thin because my weight just 40 kg. I hope I can have a good shape someday 
Actually, I am a friendly person. I love to have many friends and help the other people but sometimes many people said that I am an arrogant person but it’s not true. I am just shame to talk with a stranger. I afford to make friends with the other people. I try to have more respect with new people in my life.
Talk about my hobby. Like my father, I like music very much. I always learn about music, traditional music and modern music. I think traditional music is very unique. I play Talempong, music traditional from Sumatera Barat, since I was in Junior High school until now. I play music modern too, I play keyboard but now I am interested to play bass because I think it’s very cool. I hope there is someone who is wants to teach me, how to play it well.
Now, I study in Universitas Negeri Padang in English Major. Before continue my study in UNP, I studied in Don Bosco Senior High school. I graduated from here in 2010. Before that, I graduated from Theresia Elementary school and Frater Junior high school. I choose English major in University because I want to study abroad. I have a plan for it. Someday, I want to continue my study in University of Sydney, Australia. I hope I can make it real.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

be yourself !!
that is good essay alfa!
and keep writing!!

Gusneldi Andyra Putra said...

GOod ...
"Talk about my hobby", it is not a good topic sentence for the sixth paragraph ...
YOu should change it ..
So far so good , thanks ...

Awlia fadhli said...

you essay is very flat..
why don't you add more interesting information...

that is all from me..
and see you next...

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