Writing 1 Activity 4
Procedure Essay
P4 D2
How to Make a Brownies Cake
Brownies is a very delicious cake. I think everyone like to eat brownies cake and want to make it by their self. Do you know how to make this delicious cake? It is very easy. Now, I want to tell you how to make a delicious brownies cake.
If you want to make a brownies cake, you must prepare all of the materials. There are 8 eggs, 250 gram butter, 75 gram chocolate, 150 gram white flavor, 40 gram sugar powder, a half bottle of liquid milk, 2 tablespoon of vanili essences, a sachet of TBK.
First, steam the chocolate and butter until melted. Second, put eggs, white flavor and sugar powder and mix them all until become a batter. Then, add the milk to that batter and mix them again. After all of them mixed, add the chocolate and butter that melted and stir them all. For make your brownies cake more delicious and good looking, you can add vanili essence and TBK. After all of the butter mix, steam than about 30 minutes.
After you follow the step, you can serve and enjoy it. It must be a delicious brownies cake. But, if you want to make your brownies more delicious, you can spread strawberry jam on your brownies cake or put cheese on your brownies cake. It is very easy, isn’t it? So, now, let’s make it by yourself. I think when we make it by our self, the taste must be more delicious
By : Vincensia Alfa
NK-2/2010/17388
Tuesday, April 26, 2011
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7 comments:
i think in P2, "if" i think you should change the another sentence to make a new paragraph...
in last paragraph don't use contras "isn’t" and "let's"
you essay is good..
make it more interesting..
keep spirit.. :))
your essay is good enough but you don't explore more your idea...
and I think it's too many dot. why don't you make it to complex sentence..
and pay attention to use contraction...
that's all..
thanks..
don't forget to comment my blog too..
Hi Alva,.
Your essay is good enought,..
I am interested about it and maybe I'll try it soon,.
But, pay attention to the contraction,.
Find many contractions on your essay,.
such as "isn’t it" and "let's"
I think it's good to you to change them with "Is not it" and " let us"
That's all,..
So far so good,.
Keep writing,.
:)
NB: do not forget to give your comment on my blog,. Thanks,..
i think your essay so short..
you can make it long, please add more idea.
it is better if you make space for each paragraph.
mbak,,
so far your essay is good enough,,
but keep pay attention about grammar, diction and punctuation mark,,,
that's from me!!
keep writing!!
:)
I like your essay alfa..
and would be nice if you try to make it seriously and let me taste it! :)
keep writing dude!!
thanks for the comments guys..
i will pay attention to your comments and effort to improve it :)
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