My hometown
My name is Vincensia Alfa Bhineka Putri. I was born in Padang on 27 September 1992, but my parents doesn’t come from Padang. My father comes from Muntilan, in the middle of Java and my mother comes from Sumba, NTT, but they work in Padang. And for me, Padang is my hometown because I have been living here since I was born.
Padang is not a crowded city, except in the morning, because there are many people want to go for work and anything else. But in the noon and evening, Padang is free from the traffic jam. And because of that, Padang is free from pollution. But now, people like to drive car and ride motorcycle rather than walk.
Padang has many beautiful places to visit. One of them is beach. I love to see Padang beach. It has beautiful waves. I can see sun rise and sun set there and tourists like to visit it too. Beside of Padang beach, there are many beach in Padang, like Air Manis beach, Caroline beach, Nirmala beach and anything else. But because of the earthquake, people scare to go to the beach, but I hope the disaster never come to our beautiful city.
That’s all about my hometown, and if you want to see the most beautiful beach, you must come to Padang and I think you will not disappointed to visit it.
4 comments:
"my parents doesn’t come from Padang"
I think, it is false..
"my parents do not come from padang"
that is true...
heheheeh....
so far your essay is good enough,,
but it better to you to put some picture,, it will make your essay more interesting..
then i think you have to give more information about the tourism object that you have given it in your essay,,
that's all from me,,
:)
In paragraph 1 line 4,you write conjunction when you begin write the sentence...
According to me,don't put or write conjunction when you begin write a sentence.
That's all from me..
tq,:)
Padang is the city where we belong to.
that is good essay alfa!!
and keep writing!!
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